One of your friends wants to apply for a job at a summer school camp as a sports coach. Write a letter to the camp manager to recommend your friend. In your letter: say how well you know your friend describe the qualifications and experience that your friend has explain why your friend would be suitable for this job.

Dear Mr. Jones, I am writing to recommend one of my friends who is interested in a sports coach at your summer school camp. My friend, James White, has recently graduated from the sports academy as a gymnastics teacher at London College. He has very good communication skills with children. His discipline and positive approach towards his duties give him many advantages as a professional. He has had some work experiences at our school during his internship. He has given tennis and swimming lessons to our second and third-grade students. All of our pupils were cheerful about attending his classes and their families gave positive feedback about him. He is an enthusiastic and energetic young sports teacher. I believe that he will easily adapt there and increase the good vibrate among the children. He has already applied for
position via individual application. You may call me whenever you want to discuss his proficiency as a reference. I hope my mail is heard well. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Best Regards, Jane Fonda
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  • moreover
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