You live in a room which you share with another student. You have some problems with your roommate. Write a letter to the accomodation officer of the college to change your room. In your letter: mention the problems you are facing say how these problems are affecting you *request for a new room

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Dear Sir,

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is to inform you that I am a final year

student

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at Seneca College and I am staying in college accommodation in

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number 207 where I share my

room

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with a first-year

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named Romy. I want to change my

room

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as I am facing issues with my roommate. My roommate is a first-year

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, and he does not have much work or study pressure yet.

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, he keeps on partying in the

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with his friends.

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, he does not use headphones

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listening to music, which is causing a lot of disturbance. I am not able to concentrate on my studies. Not only

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, he even smokes in the

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itself.

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this

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, I am having health issues as well, as I am allergic to any kind of smoke. I have spoken to him politely about all these issues, but he is not bothered about it. My final term exam is around the corner,

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, I would request you to kindly change my

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. I would like to have an independent

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or I can share it with any senior

student

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. I request you change my

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as early as possible

otherwise

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, my grades will be impacted. Yours Sincerely, John

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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