You live in a room which you share with another student. You have some problems with your roommate. Write a letter to the accomodation officer of the college to change your room. In your letter: mention the problems you are facing say how these problems are affecting you *request for a new room

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Dear Sir,

This

is to inform you that I am a final year

student

at Seneca College and I am staying in college accommodation in

room

number 207 where I share my

room

with a first-year

student

named Romy. I want to change my

room

as I am facing issues with my roommate. My roommate is a first-year

student

, and he does not have much work or study pressure yet.

Therefore

, he keeps on partying in the

room

with his friends.

Moreover

, he does not use headphones

while

listening to music, which is causing a lot of disturbance. I am not able to concentrate on my studies. Not only

this

, he even smokes in the

room

itself.

Due to

this

, I am having health issues as well, as I am allergic to any kind of smoke. I have spoken to him politely about all these issues, but he is not bothered about it. My final term exam is around the corner,

hence

, I would request you to kindly change my

room

. I would like to have an independent

room

or I can share it with any senior

student

. I request you change my

room

as early as possible

otherwise

, my grades will be impacted. Yours Sincerely, John

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7 paragraphs

207 words

8.50

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