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Some people today believe that the world's increase in population is unsustainable and will eventually lead to a global crisis.Other people believe that world population is necessary and beneficial as it creates the growth of the world's economy and society. Discuss both views and give your option.

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A lot of
people
believe
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think that the growth of the
word
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world
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population
 may lead to a shortage of
food
 and
water
, and may lead to a
world wide
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worldwide
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 crisis.
While
 others believe that the more the increase the better
world
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the world
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 economy will be. On
one
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 hand, There
is
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 the
people
 who think that the more we grow the less
food
 and
water
 we have, You could see
this
happeing
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happening
 in some less lucky countries, Where they
had
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food
 and
water
 but as they
grow
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grew
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 the more it
became
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becomes
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 unsustainable to
provied
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provide
 for themselves. Which could lead to a civil war and/or a
bankrubt
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bankrupt
bankruptcy
 country.
On the other hand
, We have the
people
 who believe
the
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that
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world
population
 growth is beneficial
where
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because
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its
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it
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increase
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increases
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world
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the world
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poplation
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population
 and
society
 as a whole. In
short
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 the more there
is
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are
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people
 the more there is someone who wants to buy something,
This
 is how the economy
grow
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grows
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. In
addtion
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addition
,
Society
 would benefit
by
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 more
people
 picking up harder jobs and unwanted jobs. When there
is
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are
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 more
new borns
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newborns
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 the chance of
society
 getting
a
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better chef, Doctor and a better singer.
While
 both of them have a point to make, I do not think
its
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it
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 a good idea to
inforce
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enforce
 a rule that says you can’t have babies.
food
 and
water
 can be used in a smart way so that it is more sustainable.
Thus
 there will be no
world
 crisis , And the economy will grow along
the
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with the
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population
. and the
benefit
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benefits
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 of the growth of
world
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the world
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population
 to
society
 are more than its negative.
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