the chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.
The bar chart illustrates the
amount
of Change the quantifier
number
minutes
(in Use synonyms
billions
) of telephone calls in the UK among three categories: local, national and international-fixed Use synonyms
line
, mobiles from 1995 to 2002.
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Overall
, it is obvious that calls made via local, and fixed Linking Words
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line
were the most popular type in terms of Fix the agreement mistake
lines
overall
usage. The lowest figures on the chart are for mobile calls, but Linking Words
this
category Linking Words
also
saw the most increase in Linking Words
users
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user
minutes
.
In 1998 and 1999, the graph shows local-fixed Use synonyms
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line
around 90 Fix the agreement mistake
lines
minutes
(Use synonyms
billions
), and national and international-fixed Use synonyms
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line
approximately 50 Fix the agreement mistake
lines
minutes
(Use synonyms
billions
). Use synonyms
On the other hand
, calls made by mobile increased Linking Words
about
5 Change preposition
by about
minutes
(Use synonyms
billions
).
In 1995 and 2002, the chart Use synonyms
demonstrate
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demonstrates
local-fixed
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that the local
line
was not changed Use synonyms
nearly
70, Change preposition
by nearly
while
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national
and international-fixed Add an article
the national
line
was about 35 Use synonyms
then
became around 60 Linking Words
minutes
(Use synonyms
billions
). Use synonyms
In addition
, mobiles were around 5 and Linking Words
then
became almost 45minutes (Linking Words
billions
).Use synonyms
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