the chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.
The bar chart illustrates the
amount
of Change the quantifier
number
minutes
(in billions
) of telephone calls in the UK among three categories: local, national and international-fixed line
, mobiles from 1995 to 2002.
Overall
, it is obvious that calls made via local, and fixed line
were the most popular type in terms of Fix the agreement mistake
lines
overall
usage. The lowest figures on the chart are for mobile calls, but this
category also
saw the most increase in users
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user
minutes
.
In 1998 and 1999, the graph shows local-fixed line
around 90 Fix the agreement mistake
lines
minutes
(billions
), and national and international-fixed line
approximately 50 Fix the agreement mistake
lines
minutes
(billions
). On the other hand
, calls made by mobile increased about
5 Change preposition
by about
minutes
(billions
).
In 1995 and 2002, the chart demonstrate
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demonstrates
local-fixed
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that the local
line
was not changed nearly
70, Change preposition
by nearly
while
national
and international-fixed Add an article
the national
line
was about 35 then
became around 60 minutes
(billions
). In addition
, mobiles were around 5 and then
became almost 45minutes (billions
).Submitted by essammohamed2015516 on
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