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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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According to
 a recent survey of university students, whether learning about other subjects
besides
 their main subjects or not, has become a serious point of contention. ,
however
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 there are a few people who,believe it is a waste of time. I personally acknowledge the first group and
this
 essay will discuss both sides of
this
 argument. To commence ,each group may have their own qualification ,
hence
,there will be many reasons for
this
 phenomenon. On the one side,some people choose to be more active than ordinary people
such
 as professional
athlete
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athletes
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,students because they are preparing for championships,they have to be present in
gym
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, school , functional practices and etc.. . As a ,result it is logical to participate in other courses
in addition
 to the main one. On the other side , there are some passive pupils who only prefer to follow their own
qualification
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qualifications
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. As an example ,
this
 year my classmates were too lazy to participate in various classes and they only made fun of active ones.
this
 may happen
due to
 a lack of energy or an unhealthy lifestyle which leads youngsters to be inactive.
To sum up
,
although
 each company may have their own justifications,
i
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I
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 personally prefer the first band because
not
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I not
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 only im very active but
also
 encourage my friends to be energetic.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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