The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999.

The display table

describe

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describes

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the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999. There are 7 family types and

data

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the data

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is in percentage. The family type and proportion of people from each household type living in poverty, in single

aged

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apply

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person there are 6% with 54000, in aged

couple

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couples

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there is only 4% with 48000, in single, no children there only 19% with 359000, in couple, no children there are only 19% with 211000, in sole parent there are 21% with only 232000, in couple with children there are only 12% with 933000 and in all households there are 11% with 1837000. The highest is

sole

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a sole

the sole

The noun phrase sole parent seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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parent with 232000 but it's in 21%.

The all

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All

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households

is

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are

The singular verb is does not appear to agree with the plural subject households. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.

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11% with 1837000.

To conclude

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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

, the above information is on 7 family types

as well as

Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

there proportion of people from each household type living in poverty from Australia in 1999.