The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999.

The table below shows the proportion of different categories of 

families living in poverty in Australia in 1999.
The display table
describe
Change the verb form
describes
show examples
the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999. There are 7 family types and
data
Correct article usage
the data
show examples
is in percentage. The family type and proportion of people from each household type living in poverty, in single
aged
Correct word choice
apply
show examples
person there are 6% with 54000, in aged
couple
Fix the agreement mistake
couples
show examples
there is only 4% with 48000, in single, no children there only 19% with 359000, in couple, no children there are only 19% with 211000, in sole parent there are 21% with only 232000, in couple with children there are only 12% with 933000 and in all households there are 11% with 1837000. The highest is
sole
Add an article
a sole
the sole
show examples
parent with 232000 but it's in 21%.
The all
Remove the article
All
show examples
households
is
Change the verb form
are
show examples
11% with 1837000.
To conclude
, the above information is on 7 family types
as well as
there proportion of people from each household type living in poverty from Australia in 1999.
Submitted by purvaam383 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "proportion" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • categories
  • families
  • poverty
  • single-parent
  • childcare
  • income
  • couples
  • dependents
  • older adults
  • pensions
  • unemployed
  • financial resources
What to do next:
Look at other essays: