The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999.

The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999.
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The display table
describe
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the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999. There are 7 family types and
data
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the data

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is in percentage. The family type and proportion of people from each household type living in poverty, in single
aged
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apply

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person there are 6% with 54000, in aged
couple
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couples

It seems that couple may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

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there is only 4% with 48000, in single, no children there only 19% with 359000, in couple, no children there are only 19% with 211000, in sole parent there are 21% with only 232000, in couple with children there are only 12% with 933000 and in all households there are 11% with 1837000. The highest is
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a sole
the sole

The noun phrase sole parent seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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parent with 232000 but it's in 21%.
The all
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All

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households
is
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are

The singular verb is does not appear to agree with the plural subject households. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.

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11% with 1837000.
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there proportion of people from each household type living in poverty from Australia in 1999.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "proportion" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • categories
  • families
  • poverty
  • single-parent
  • childcare
  • income
  • couples
  • dependents
  • older adults
  • pensions
  • unemployed
  • financial resources
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