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The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the total
number
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 of
minutes
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 of telephone calls which were made in the UK, based on three categories over a
period
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 of 7 years from 1995-2002. Units are measured in billions of
minutes
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.
Overall
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, it can be noted that the
number
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 of
minutes
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 spent on local-fixed
lines
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 fluctuated over the given
period
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,
while
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 for national and international-fixed
lines
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 and mobile (all calls), they went up.
Furthermore
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, the most popular method of communication in Britain was via local - fixed
lines
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. With regards to calls made by local - fixed
lines
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, it started with more than 70
billion
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minutes
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 in the first year after which it increased gradually reaching a peak of 90
billion
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minutes
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 in 1999. Following that, it went down steadily standing at the exact
number
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 of
minutes
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 in 1995.
On the other hand
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, the
number
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 of
minutes
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 of telephone calls made via national and international fixed
lines
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 began at less than 40
billion
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minutes
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 at the beginning of the
period
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 and there was a steady climb reaching the highest point in the final year, accounting for precisely 50
billion
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minutes
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.
Similarly
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, the
minutes
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 spent on call through mobile calls increased by around eight times from approximately 4
billion
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minutes
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 to somewhere around 45
billion
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minutes
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at the end
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 of the
period
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.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, minutes, period, lines, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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