You currently live in a rental apartment, and the noise from your neighbors disturbs you. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter describe how this situation affects you; explain what steps you have taken to address the problem; ask the landlord to take action to resolve the issue.

Hello John, Hope you're doing well, I am writing
this
to you
inform
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about
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you about
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the noise problem, I am facing from the people living next door. So, the problem is,
they
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that they
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play loud music until late
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at nights
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nights
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night
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,
every
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and every
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second day, they have
party
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a party
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at their house, so the noise from people is giving us a lot of trouble. You
knoe
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know
that I am a
full time
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worker; it is very hard for me to concentrate on the work
next
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day. I tried to talk with them very politely, but it
seems
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like they ignored it. So, I am considering you to take some actions and resolve the issue as soon as possible. Thank you,
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Your
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faithfully, Jaspreet
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