The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. Japan’s population: past, present and future trends.

The chart and  table below give information about population figures in Japan.

Japan’s population: past, present and future trends.
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Both data provide information about Japan’s
population
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figures from 1950, the current time, and its projection till 2055.
Overall
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, the
population
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of Japan had a stable increase from 1950 to 2005 and it is predicted to decrease for the next half-decade.
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, its older citizens have almost similar trends but experience a slightly different change in their proportion as they have risen in percentage and will continue rising from 1950 to 2055. Based on the chart provided, the
population
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of Japan rose steadily for just over a decade (1950-2005) as it started from 84.1
million
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people and
then
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reached 127.8
million
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citizens. Since
then
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it experienced a slight decrease for the next five years for about 2
million
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of its people. Surprisingly, it is predicted to have a dramatic fall in 2055 which only has just slightly below 90
million
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inhabitants.
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, the table as another data for their citizens who are over 65 years old shows its
overall
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population
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as well as
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its proportion. It is clearly illustrated that these Japanese had only 4.1
million
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elders (4.9%) in 1950 which increased significantly for the next 55 years as it rose for approximately 21
million
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of them or about 15%.
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, it is projected to have another rise for the next three decades (14%) before it falls by almost a
million
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of the
population
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in 2055.
On the other hand
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,
although
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it will have a decrease in its inhabitants, the percentage will keep rising for just below a tenth.
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