The chart below shoes the percentage of households in owned and rented accomodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart illustrates the households owning and renting accommodation in England and Wales

percentagewise

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percentage-wise

between 1918 and 2011.

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, There was a steep but gradual decline in the number of individuals who

rents

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rent

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a house and it has witnessed a downward trend over the

period

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of time.

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,

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the number of households who owns a house has showcased a dramatic rise

throught

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through

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the time and mostly has experienced an upward trend. At the beginning of the

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, household owners were just over 20

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where

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as

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whereas

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household rentals were well over 80

percent

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. After witnessing a continuous surge until 1971, In the year

1971

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both

has

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reached

at

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the same

levels

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level

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to

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of

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approximately 50

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percent

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per cent

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then

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grew around 20

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percent

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and it has reached nearly 70

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percent

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before

receeding

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receding

proceeding

to just under 65

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percent

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at the end

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of the

period

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. In the year 1918, the percentage of

household

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households

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on

rental

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a rental

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basis were well under 80

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percent

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but after experiencing declining remarkably

untill

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until

1971. In the year 1971, Both met at around 50 percentage levels

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from 1971 to 2011

has

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fell more or less 20

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percent

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and reaching just over 20

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percent

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before witnessing a minimal surge of about 5

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percent

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and reaching considerably over

than

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35

percentage

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per cent

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at the end

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of the

period

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