The chart below shoes the percentage of households in owned and rented accomodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the households owning and renting accommodation in England and Wales
percentagewise
between 1918 and 2011.
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percentage-wise
Overall
, There was a steep but gradual decline in the number of individuals who rents
a house and it has witnessed a downward trend over the Correct subject-verb agreement
rent
period
of time. while
,
the number of households who owns a house has showcased a dramatic rise Remove the comma
apply
throught
the time and mostly has experienced an upward trend.
At the beginning of the Correct your spelling
through
throughout
period
, household owners were just over 20 percent
where
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apply
as
household rentals were well over 80 Correct word choice
whereas
percent
. After witnessing a continuous surge until 1971, In the year 1971
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reached Unnecessary verb
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levels
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level
to
approximately 50 Change preposition
of
percent
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per cent
then
grew around 20 percent
and it has reached nearly 70 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
before Change the spelling
per cent
receeding
to just under 65 Correct your spelling
receding
proceeding
percent
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per cent
at the end
of the period
.
In the year 1918, the percentage of household
on Fix the agreement mistake
households
rental
basis were well under 80 Correct article usage
a rental
percent
but after experiencing declining remarkably Change the spelling
per cent
untill
1971. In the year 1971, Both met at around 50 percentage levels Correct your spelling
until
then
from 1971 to 2011 has
fell more or less 20 Unnecessary verb
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percent
and reaching just over 20 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
before witnessing a minimal surge of about 5 Change the spelling
per cent
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and reaching considerably over Change the spelling
per cent
than
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percentage
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at the end
of the period
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