You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter: • Introduce yourself. • Explain that you did not buy the items listed. • Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem.

Dear Sir/ Madam, How are you today? My name is Gurpinder Kaur and I have had both debit and
credit
accounts with your bank for the
last
three years.
Although
, I am writing
this
letter to enquire about my monthly statement of
credit
card
in which few of the transactions were not done by me.
To begin
with, there was one payment for gas at Circle K on the 28th of July and I am pretty sure I didn't because I don't have a car. To explain
further
, I called on the same day one of your customer service representatives and she said she would fix the problem and send me a new
card
in two weeks but she didn't.
Secondly
, there is a huge bill for
pizza
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restaurant in Toronto on 29th July but I am living in Ottawa.
Lastly
, there is an expensive purchase of groceries from my
credit
and it is
also
in Toronto.
Thus
, I believe she forgot to block my account.
As a result
, I would like to grab your attention on my letter with serious actions.
Also
, I want you to remove all these transactions from my account as
this
is not a mistake and send me a new
card
as soon as possible so, I can pay my monthly
credit
card
bills. I look forward to hearing from you. Thank you in advance. Yours faithfully, Gurpinder Kaur
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