the plans below show the layout of a universitiy's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The two maps demonstrate the university
sports
centre in its current form and its proposed enhancement.
Overall
, the plan is to expand the centre’s main building into outdoor courts and remove all outdoor areas of the centre. Currently, the centre has one changing room, gym, 25-meter
pool
and
reception
facilities. To the east and west sides of the
,
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building there are outdoor courts.
According to
the proposal, the 25m
pool
, changing room,
reception
and seating area will remain the same as the original site. The first development will be the gym’s expansion through the easterly
side
and acquiring its own entrance. To the south
side
of the gym and east
side
of the seating ,area the
sports
hall will be added and both of the
sports
hall’s and gym’s east
side
two new dance studios will constructed. To the west
side
of the changing room second
pool
will constructed under the name of the leisure
pool
.
Additionally
, two new changing rooms, a
sports
shop and
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cafe will be added to the
reception
zone. One of the changing rooms and cafe will placed on the east
side
and the other changing rooms that will be specially constructed for the leisure
pool
and
sports
shop will be placed on the west
side
of the
reception
.
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