The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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These pie Charts show the
water
consumption in
various Use synonyms
sector
in the specific six Fix the agreement mistake
sectors
region
all Change to a plural noun
regions
Over
the world.
we can see here North Fix capitalization
over
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America
america
and Europe
are the highest Change the capitalization
America
water
user in the industrial area Use synonyms
whereas
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use
the most Use synonyms
proporation
in agriculture. Household usage rate is always lower Correct your spelling
proportion
comparing
those two.
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compared to
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spend 53% of Correct your spelling
Europe
their
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its
water
and North Use synonyms
America
is 48% Use synonyms
while
other areas are showing Linking Words
this
rate under 12% or less in the purpose of Industrial Linking Words
use
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occupy
the highest sum of 88% in Central Change the verb form
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Asia
. Africa and South East Use synonyms
Asia
stand for 84% and 81% respectively. South Use synonyms
America
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rcentage
of 71% and North Correct your spelling
percentage
America
witnessed 32%, the least in Use synonyms
this
purpose.
Domestic Linking Words
use
always shows the lowest Use synonyms
water
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use
percentage If we compare with the other two sectors. Use synonyms
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use
19%, and Use synonyms
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Europeans
use
15% of Use synonyms
water
in Use synonyms
the
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apply
works
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work
is
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are
same
for Central Correct article usage
the same
Asia
and South East Use synonyms
Asia
. African rate of Use synonyms
water
consumption for domestic Use synonyms
use
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Americans
usage is 4% extra than Africa and stood at 13%.Replace the word
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