the charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did no go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.
#show #uk #graduate #students #go #work #college #summaries #information #features #comparisons #relevent
The two bar charts illustrate the information about the students who completed their graduation and post-graduation but they haven't got a fixed job in the year 2008. In
this
information full-time job is not included.
Linking Words
overall
, the two diagrams clearly Linking Words
shows
that most Change the verb form
show
of
Change preposition
apply
the
individual are Correct article usage
apply
intrested
in part-time jobs and Correct your spelling
interested
further
studies, Linking Words
Linking Words
however
they are Add a comma
,however
moduratly
Correct your spelling
moderately
intrested
in unemployment and the least favour is voluntary work.
In the beginning, In the year ,2008 most of the individual are Correct your spelling
interested
intrested
in Correct your spelling
interested
further
study after their graduation. Linking Words
In addition
, part-time and Linking Words
the
unemployment are done mostly by 20000 students. ,Correct article usage
apply
Linking Words
Moreover
the Add a comma
,Moreover
volentry
work is done only by 3500 Correct your spelling
voluntary
people
after their graduation. compartely the Use synonyms
further
study is the highest.
Linking Words
In addition
, after their post-graduation convocation, Linking Words
people
Use synonyms
are
like to do part-time and Unnecessary verb
apply
further
study as their main thing. Other than that 1625 young Linking Words
people
were unemployed. Voluntary work is not very popular and it is done only by 345 Use synonyms
people
.Use synonyms
Submitted by insighttribez on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further, in addition".
▼
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
▼
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words people with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
▼