The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The provided pie charts illustrate the distribution of time allocated by employed adults to various activities in a specific country during two separate years , 1958 and 2008 . The number of sleeping is decreased by 7 percent ( 32% to 25%) . The significant falling percentage of activity over 50 years in adults is going out with acquaintances , from 19 to 6 per cent.
By contrast
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, the trend of relaxing at home has increased . In 1958
this
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number was 8 % but after fifteen years it became 13 % . The most growth was observed in working activity by 9 units ( 33 % to 42 % ) .
Also
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, travel to work quadrupled by the amount in a half-century. In the
last
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50s started at 2 % and culminated at 8 % .
Likewise
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, playing sports or other interests increased from 6 % to 8 % and correlation became equal with travel to work . Looking from an
overall
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perspective , 2 activities increased and 4 decreased for 5 decades . Working was like practice among grown people.
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the unpopular was travel between 1958 to 2008 .
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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