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The charts below present information about electricity generated using renewable and non renewable energy in the United States in 2009 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below present information about electricity generated using renewable and non renewable energy in the United States in 2009 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph represents a billion kilowatt per hour of electricity used by people in the United States which is produced by sustainable and non-sustainable
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 of
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 applied between the period from 2009 and 2019. It can be observed that non-sustainable
energy
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sources
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 were used more apply than sustainable
energy
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sources
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 in the United States generation 2009 and 2019 but certain downfall in non-sustainable
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sources
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 in later years which is not the case for sustainable
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. In 2009, coal was more overused than natural gas but later in 2009 , the utilization of coal was staged down and the utilization of natural gas hit the sky at 1500 kilowatts per hour.
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 the sustainable
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 source is going upward standardly compared to 2009, wind and solar
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 dramatically increased in the year 2019 with an average of 72 kilowatts per hour.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sources, energy with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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