The charts show projections for global production by sector in 2040 and 2060. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two pie charts show the world's expected production by six different sectors in 2040 and 2060.

Overall

, Services will be the highest production in both years, 2040 and 2060 respectively.

On the other hand

, agriculture will continue to decline by 2060. Looking into more detail, comparing 2040 and 2060, it is believed there will be a slight growth in 4 of the 6 sectors.

For instance

, the increase will be only one or two per cent in services, manufacturing, info-corn tech and materials than in 2040 with 41%, 33%, 16 and 4%.

However

according to

the charts, by 2060, fewer people will be interested in agriculture or energy as they have lost popularity and will end up in 1% and 5% in 2060.

Therefore

, every 20 years it is projected to be aware of a moderate rise.

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