The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The given maps illustrate the layout of
Islip
town
center
in the present dayChange the spelling
centre
,
and its plan for Remove the comma
apply
the
development.
Correct article usage
apply
Overall
, it can be seen that currently
Add a comma
,currently
Islip
town
center
only has a few public facilities. Change the spelling
centre
However
, in the planned development map, there will be several new amenities and the
pedestrian area.
Recently, Correct article usage
a
Islip
town
center
has Change the spelling
centre
one-line
main Correct article usage
a one-line
road
from the west to the east. Then
, there are shops
in the north and the south of the Main road
. Moreover
, behind the shops
, a housing area has been placed. From the main road
, there are two branch streets. One of the branches is located in
the left side of Change preposition
on
Shops
, and there is a school Correct article usage
the Shops
in
the end of the street. Change the preposition
at
In addition
, the other branch is in
the east side of Change preposition
on
Shops
, and it is ended by the Park.
Correct article usage
the Shops
Furthermore
, in the plans for Islip
town
center
development, the main Change the spelling
centre
road
will be removed. However
, there will be a
new Remove the article
apply
road
access called dual
carriageway that will surround the Correct article usage
a dual
center
and Change the spelling
centre
does
not have Unnecessary verb
apply
the
ending. Correct article usage
an
Moreover
, in the future
only one Shop will remain, and the other Shop will be removed. Add a comma
,future
Then
, the removed
Verb problem
apply
shops
will be replaced by several new facilities such
as Bus
Station, Shopping Correct article usage
a Bus
Center
, and Car Park. The school is still in the same place as today, yet the park will be renovated to be smaller. In addition
, new housing will be constructed in the south and north area
.Fix the agreement mistake
areas
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, in addition, moreover".
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words islip, town, center, road, shops with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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