The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transportation.
The line graph below demonstrates the amount of products transported by
road
, Use synonyms
water
, Use synonyms
rail
and Use synonyms
pipeline
in the UK during 28 years.
It is noticeable that the majority of goods are exported by Use synonyms
road
but the Use synonyms
pipeline
was the Use synonyms
last
priority for transporting products.
In detail, in 1974 the majority of products exported by Linking Words
road
were about 70 million tonnes Use synonyms
while
transporting by Linking Words
pipeline
was less than 10 million tonnes. Use synonyms
However
, exporting by Linking Words
water
and Use synonyms
rail
was approximately the same figures amounting to 40 million tonnes. In the first 8 ,years the numbers of goods transported by Use synonyms
water
and Use synonyms
pipeline
increased significantly Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
rail
and Use synonyms
road
declined considerably.
In the middle of the period, exporting by Use synonyms
water
and Use synonyms
pipeline
approximately remain unchanged Use synonyms
on the other hand
using the Linking Words
road
and Use synonyms
rail
for transport almost increased but Use synonyms
rail
in 1994 decreased slightly.In the rest of the period, transporting by Use synonyms
road
, Use synonyms
water
and Use synonyms
rail
increased moderately Use synonyms
while
the sum exported by Linking Words
pipeline
remained stable after a slight increase.Use synonyms
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