The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transportation.
The line graph below demonstrates the amount of products transported by
road
, water
, rail
and pipeline
in the UK during 28 years.
It is noticeable that the majority of goods are exported by road
but the pipeline
was the last
priority for transporting products.
In detail, in 1974 the majority of products exported by road
were about 70 million tonnes while
transporting by pipeline
was less than 10 million tonnes. However
, exporting by water
and rail
was approximately the same figures amounting to 40 million tonnes. In the first 8 ,years the numbers of goods transported by water
and pipeline
increased significantly while
rail
and road
declined considerably.
In the middle of the period, exporting by water
and pipeline
approximately remain unchanged on the other hand
using the road
and rail
for transport almost increased but rail
in 1994 decreased slightly.In the rest of the period, transporting by road
, water
and rail
increased moderately while
the sum exported by pipeline
remained stable after a slight increase.Submitted by www.marzieh.eidi on
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