One of your friends wants to apply for a job at a summer school camp as a sports trainer. Write a letter to the camp manager to recommend your friend. In your letter •say how well you know your friend •describe the qualifications and experience that your friend has •explain why your friend would be suitable for this job.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
letter to suggest my friend for the job role of sports trainer required at your summer school camp. My friend's name is Tom, I have known him for the
last
three years. We did our graduation programme at the same university and stayed together in the same room for two years,
hence
, I got a chance to know him in person. Tom is a graduate in physical training, after that he worked in an international school in Australia for a year. He came back from that place
due to
family issues. Currently, he is pursuing research study at London University in Advanced Sports,
hence
I believe he can work effectively at your school. As the job is only for two months, he is interested in applying because he is on summer vacation.
Moreover
, interested in child sports more than adults, so his training will be effective for students. I believe he is the best candidate for
this
job because of his dedication and knowledge in the same field. I expect to hear from you soon. Yours sincerely Manuel Martin
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