The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates how many passengers use the London Underground Station in different hours of a typical day.
Overall
, the peak time of using the Underground is 8:00 a.m. and 6:00 pm.
To begin
with, it is the highest number
that people
who use station in the early morning(at 8:00 am) around 400 people
.It is the time when people
go to work, university, school. This
number
drops rapidly to less than 200 at around 10 a.m., which is half of the peak hour. Metro usage gradually increases after 11:00, but there is a sharp decline after 2:00 until 4:00. Meanwhile, the number
of people
using the metro at 16:00 is around 100 people
. After
this
rapid decline, there was a severe increase and the number
userers reached its peak at 18:00. The last
drop in subway usage occurs 18:00pm. The number
of people
using the metro in the last
hours is approximately 150 people
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