The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given pie charts illustrate the proportion of water used by six different areas of the world.
Overall
, all the countries used their water for agricultural use with a huge percentage.The second most common was industrial practice.However
,the remaining one is domestic use,has
less usage.
Correct word choice
and has
To begin
with,North America and Europe have less than 40 per cent for agro usage.The remaining Kingdoms have more than 70%. Similarly
,Central Asia and South East Asia have the same odds with 7 per cent. The following commonwealth has greater than 10% util;ize their
water for domestic usage.
Correct pronoun usage
its
On the other hand
, North America and Europe consume more than 48% of drinks for industrial.In addition
, the balance world
use 5% to one in ten approximately.
In fine it can be said thatCorrect your spelling
would
,
Central Asia applies many reservoirs for agriculture around 88 per cent compared to three categories of drink used in six areas of the world.Remove the comma
apply
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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