The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table measures in percentage how jobless British women and men employ their day during morning and afternoon in
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last
year. Correct article usage
the last
Overall
, it can be seen that both Linking Words
gender
spent the majority of their time doing these three chores, housework, shopping and job hunting.
Housework was done predominantly by 49% of women in the morning, Change to a plural noun
genders
while
21% of them preferred to clean the household in the afternoon. Linking Words
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number declined considerably with men, with 19% performing Linking Words
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chore early in the day, and as low as 7% after 12 noon.
Shopping was a preferred activity by females with a total of 43% as opposed to males with just 29%.
Visiting friends and relatives was exercised relatively by more females than males, 27% and 18% respectively.
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On the contrary
more men, 34%, seemed to Linking Words
allot
time to find a job than women ( 29%). Correct your spelling
allow
This
inclination continued to be true when it came to gardening, decorating, walking, playing Linking Words
sport
, drinking and lingering around.
Both genders did the following activities with an approximate close rate Fix the agreement mistake
sports
such
as watching television, reading and staying in bed.Linking Words
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