The bar chart below shows the percentage of people who ate 5 portions of fruit and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008. You should write at least 150 words.

The chart indicates

different

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the different

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ages of people who consumed

fruit

and

vegetables

5 times

in

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apply

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a day in the United

kingdom

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Kingdom

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during

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eight years.

Overall

, from the bar chart the women have eaten the highest percentage of

fruit

and

vegetables

each year,

while

the young people had the lowest.

Also

, the

consuming

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consumption

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rate of

fruit

and

vegetables

has risen steadily from 2001 to 2006 and

then

it

has

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decreased slightly. As can be seen from the chart

eaten

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women eating

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fruit

and

vegetables

by women have started at about 22% in 2001,

whereas

, In the following

next

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apply

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five years it

has

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reached up to 35% and

then

this

rate

has

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changed to a

decrease

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trend.

In addition

, the percentage of using

fruit

and

vegetables

for men

have

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not altered in the first three years. It is clearly seen from the figure that the

consuming

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percentage of

fruit

and

vegetables

among children has experienced

a

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an

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ascending trend from 2001 to 2007 by 25%.