The bar chart shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

The bar chart shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The picture depicts the percentage of males and females of Australian countries of different ages who participated in physical movement in 2010.
Overall
it can be seen that the women took part in sports more than the men except among youngsters who were between 14 to 24 years old.
also
at the oldest stage was the same interest in physical activity Among the younger stage between 14 to 24 years old,
while
52.8 % participated in physical activities 47.7% of females were interested in doing sports. between ages 25 to 34, the women were more passionate about exercise. In more detail, 48.9% of them were interested in
such
activities
whereas
only 42.2 of the Australian men spent their time on sports. In the next three columns ( 35 to 44, 45 to 54 and 55 to 64) the number of women who allocated their time to physical exercise was almost the same( about 53%)
although
for the men was 39.5, 43.1 and 45.1. in fact, it is obvious that the older one was more eager to exercise. In the
last
column, Australian people of different two genders had the same interest in physical activities
whereas
about 47% of them took part in these exercises.
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  • Physical activity
  • Regular exercise
  • Age demographics
  • Participation rate
  • Trend analysis
  • Gender disparity
  • Health initiatives
  • Public health policies
  • Statistical comparison
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Work commitments
  • Age-related factors
  • Preventative health
  • Exercise habits
  • Surveillance data
  • Motivators and barriers
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