You recently made reservations for dinner at a very famous and expensive restaurant in town. However, the meal and the service were terrible. The restaurant manager was not available to solve the problem, so you left without a resolution. State what problems you had with the food you ordered. Complain about the service. Describe how you want the restaurant to resolve the problem to your satisfaction.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter with regard to your restaurant service on
last
Monday during my visit for a family dinner. I am extremely dissatisfied with the food service and the gesture of your staff members. For starters, most of the dishes
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the menu card were not available.
Secondly
, My mother is lactose intolerant which we had specifically informed the waiter
while
ordering, but we
could
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able to find cheese
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salad she ordered.
Furthermore
, I
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made
reservation
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a reservation
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for 6 people early
this
morning. But
while
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I arrived at the restaurant I
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accommodated with a table only after 30 minutes of wait.
Also
, the
staffs
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are very rude and slow
while
bringing the food we need to remind them at least 4-5 times of what we ordered. I would really appreciate your immediate intervention in
this
regard. I have never
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this
much bad experience, to say the least. Kindly
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you to appoint a staff with
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hospitable nature and a customized food menu for allergic customers. Looking for your prompt action on
this
matter Yours faithfully, Jack
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