The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999.
The bar chart shows the difference between the percentage of females and males with different post-school qualifications in Australia in 1999.
Overall
, women
had the highest share in two qualifications, while
men
ranked first in three. The highest figures for women
and men
were reported in undergraduate diplomas
and skilled vocational diplomas
, respectively.
There was a significant difference between the proportions of males and females in skilled vocational diploma, with the former standing first with 90%. The disparity between the two figures was almost the same for undergraduate diplomas
and postgraduate diplomas
. However
, while
in the former women
had the highest share with 70%, men
accounted for the largest percentage in the latter with 70%.
The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men
and women
who held them in 1999.Submitted by mawka974 on
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