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The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how tehy rated hotel's customer service.

The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how tehy rated hotel's customer service.
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The pie charts
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 the ratings given by customers of Parkway
hotel
 regarding their
service
 in the years of 2005 and 2010.
Overall
, in the year
2005
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 most customers have given a review of satisfactory
service
 which is the third highest ranking from the list.
However
 minority of them have gotten
an
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excellent care from the
hotel
.
Consequently
, in 2010 the lowest percentage of people
recieved
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received
 a very poor
service
while
 most of them got
good
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 reception. In 2005 nearly
a
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half of
visitors
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the visitors
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are
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 satisfied by the
hotel
 which indicates a moderate level of satisfaction for all of them. But, in 2010 only
a
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17%
recieved
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received
 a median level
customer
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service
. The highest portion of residents consider
hotel
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 as good and
this
 is almost a four in ten. Just above
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 of people believe they were treated poorly in 2005.
However
, in 2010
this
 rank was reduced
upto
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up to
 12%.
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Comparably
, in 2010, More than a quarter of
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has
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voted for excellent customer
treatements
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treatments
 which was a growth of 23% compared to 2005.
In contrast
, a minimum of one in twenty assumed the
service
 was
exccellent
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excellent
 in 2005.
In addition
, in that year 14% and 15%
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a
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good and very poor help from the
hotel
.
Furthermore
, in 2010
hotel
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hotels
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has
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improved their customer
service
 and a minimum of 4%
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 it was very poor.
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