The bar chart below illustrates five different industries' percentage share of Brazil's economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart elaborates
the
proportion of 5 various industries in the economy of Brazil as percentages in 2009, Change preposition
on the
2019
and provides future predictions for 2029.
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and 2019
Overall
, finance, tourism and energy industry
play Fix the agreement mistake
industries
main
role Change the article
the main
while
food processing and manufacturing have less share in the overall
economy.
To give more detail, finance
industry had Correct article usage
the finance
most
impact on Add an article
the most
economy
with 30 Add an article
the economy
percent
and it increases gradually with Change the spelling
per cent
expactations
of 40 Correct your spelling
expectations
percent
in 2029. Change the spelling
per cent
Tourism
and fossil fuel sector are more or less stable, both industries stood at 25 Correct article usage
The tourism
percent
in 2009, Change the spelling
per cent
however
tourism sector is predicted to face Add a comma
,however
slight
decrease Correct article usage
a slight
to
20 Change preposition
of
percent
.
Change the spelling
per cent
On the other hand
, food
processing sector was at its highest figure in 2019 Correct article usage
the food
with
20 Change preposition
at
percent
but is projected to go down to 10 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in future. Manufacturing follows Change the spelling
per cent
quite
Add an article
the quite
a quite
opposite
pattern of finance as Correct article usage
the opposite
forecast
shows it is going to diminish from 20 Add an article
the forecast
percent
of share to 5 in 2029.Change the spelling
per cent
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