You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how rain water is collected and then treated to be used as drinking water in an Australian town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The diagram depicts the process

to get

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of getting

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clean drinking

water

by

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from

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rain in an Australian town.

Overall

, the

rain

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rainwater

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water

is collected through the drains beside houses and

then

passed through the whole procedure in order to obtain clean drinking

water

. It is evident that the

rain

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rainwater

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water

is collected by drains being attached to all houses. The

water

is

then

passed through the drain to

water

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the water

a water

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filter.After collecting the

water

, it is passed through the

water

filter to clean out bigger particles.

Then

, the

water

flows through the filter with the help of pipes to

storage

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the storage

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block where the

water

is collected. In the final stage, the

water

comes

in

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into

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the

water

treatment block through the channel. In the

water

treatment block, chemicals are used to purify and obtain clean

water

.The clean

water

obtained is traversed back to houses for drinking purposes. The process is

repititive

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repetitive

in nature and it will occur whenever it rains.