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The table below gives information about a restaurant's average sales in three different branches in 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant

The table below gives information about a restaurant's average sales in three different branches in 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant
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The given table
showed
Wrong verb form
shows
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 three different restaurant
branches
 selling
performa
Correct your spelling
performance
 in 2016. Sales
performa
Correct your spelling
are
splitted
Correct your spelling
split
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in
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into
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 six different categories :
number
 of
transactions
,
transaction
value
,
number
 both of
eat-in
 and
take away
Add a hyphen
take-away
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transactions
, and most popular item.
Number
Change the article
A number
The number
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 of
transactions
close-related
Wrong verb form
was related
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with
Change preposition
to
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number
Change the article
a number
the number
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 of
eat-in
 and take-away
transactions
,
Remove the comma
apply
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 but
had
Verb problem
did
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 not
correlated
Wrong verb form
correlate
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 with
transaction
value
 and
customers
Fix the agreement mistake
customer
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 preference.
To begin
 with, Georgia
Street
branches
 had the highest
number
 in the
number
 of
transaction
 categories with 854
orders
, followed by
Dunsmuir
Street
branches
 and
Drake
Street
branches
, with
total
Correct article usage
a total
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750
Change preposition
of 750
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orders
 and 390
orders
 respectively. Simultaneously with the previous categories, the
number
 of
eat-in
transactions
were
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was
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 405
orders
, 358
orders
, and 200
orders
 respectively, and the
number
 of take-away
transactions
are
Wrong verb form
was
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 449
orders
, 392
orders
, and 190
orders
 respectively.
Furthermore
, an anomaly occurred in
Drake
branches
 that the
number
 of
eat-in
orders
 was higher than
take-away
Correct your spelling
takeaway
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orders
.
In addition
, Georgia
Street
branches
 scored the highest
transaction
value
 with USD 10.69.
Although
 the
number
 of
transactions
 in
Drake
Correct article usage
the Drake
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Street
branches
 was lower than
Dunsmuir
Street
branches
,
but
Remove the conjunction
apply
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the
transaction
value
 was higher.
Drake
Street
branches
'
transaction
 was USD 9.02 and for
Dunsmuir
Street
 was USD 5.61.  Most
favorite
Change the spelling
favourite
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 foods in Georgia
Street
branches
 and
Drake
Street
 are not
chicken
 as a self-condiment dish, which is
chicken
Add an article
a chicken
the chicken
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 burger and
chicken
 pasta.
In contrast
,
Dunsmuir
Street
branches
'
most
Correct quantifier usage
apply
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favorite
Change the spelling
favourite
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 meal
are
Change the verb form
is
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chicken
 wings.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words branches, number, transactions, transaction, value, eat-in, street, orders, dunsmuir, drake, chicken with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 8 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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