You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter: -give details of your visit to the restaurant -explain the reason for the celebration -say what was good about the food and the service.

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Dear Sir, I'm writing in regard to my
last
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visit to your venue
last
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Saturday. I was accompanied by a bunch of young people and we, definitely, were the loudest visitors that night. At some point, I stepped on the stage and performed the song by The Beatles and it was great. It was a special day for me as I invited my dearest friends and co-workers to celebrate my bachelor party as I'm getting married in a couple of weeks. I and all invited were delighted by the atmosphere in the restaurant as the place is spacious and with great DJ stand.
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, the range of cuisine on your menu satisfied every attendee that night.
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, the waitress, who served our table, was very friendly and helpful. She advised us to combine a meal with appropriate wine which was delicious as well. Thank you for your efforts and I look forward to seeing you soon. Faithfully Yours, Gabi
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

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