Governments and big companies should work together to reverse environmental damage, rather than expecting individuals to take responsibility. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, it

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of

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governments

and renowned manufacturing companies to cooperate together in

order

to reduce environmental destruction,

instead

of expecting the citizens to take good actions. In my opinion,

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somewhat agree that both

Governments

and companies should work together so as to adjust

environmental

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degradation.

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essay will examine the suggestions

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both trends.

Firstly

, the leaders of the countries and production sectors should participate in the implementation of ecological degradation in

order

to reduce biodiversity in

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society. By doing

this

, it will help to reduce the risks associated with deforestation, bush burning and air pollution.

For instance

, the cutting down of trees by people will result

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the loss of habitat for several species in the forest.

However

, the government should implement rules and regulations in

order

to curb and control illegal hunting and cutting down of trees in the forest.

In addition

, pollution is

also

a part of the environmental problem that

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a major threat to the ecosystem.

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individuals

have

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knowledge in relation

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pollution they still choose to ignore the effects. The release of toxic chemicals like carbon dioxide and ammonia can pose a serious threat to one's health and

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the dumping of wastes inside the river can contribute to

destruction

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the destruction

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of natural habitat which contaminate

water

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supply.

Secondly

, the people of the society should

also

support the

governments

in the development of the environment by obeying the laws set down by them.

Consequently

, it

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expected

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individuals

to reduce the rate of bush burning in

order

to promote their body stability because it can result to having difficulty in breathing and skin cancer.

Also

,

individuals

should be aware that unwanted materials can be recycled into a new item so it is advised that they learn how to reuse wastes. In conclusion,

it is clear that

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governments

, companies and

individuals

should work together in

order

to achieve a great improvement in environmental

harzards

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hazards

. Yet if the

individuals

adhere to the guidelines implemented,

then

it can be maintained properly.