Governments and big companies should work together to reverse environmental damage, rather than expecting individuals to take responsibility. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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governments

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and renowned manufacturing companies to cooperate together in

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to reduce environmental destruction,

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of expecting the citizens to take good actions. In my opinion,

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somewhat agree that both

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and companies should work together so as to adjust

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degradation.

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essay will examine the suggestions

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both trends.

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, the leaders of the countries and production sectors should participate in the implementation of ecological degradation in

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to reduce biodiversity in

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society. By doing

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, it will help to reduce the risks associated with deforestation, bush burning and air pollution.

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, the cutting down of trees by people will result

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the loss of habitat for several species in the forest.

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, the government should implement rules and regulations in

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to curb and control illegal hunting and cutting down of trees in the forest.

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, pollution is

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a part of the environmental problem that

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a major threat to the ecosystem.

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individuals

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pollution they still choose to ignore the effects. The release of toxic chemicals like carbon dioxide and ammonia can pose a serious threat to one's health and

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the dumping of wastes inside the river can contribute to

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the destruction

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of natural habitat which contaminate

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supply.

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, the people of the society should

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support the

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in the development of the environment by obeying the laws set down by them.

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individuals

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to reduce the rate of bush burning in

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to promote their body stability because it can result to having difficulty in breathing and skin cancer.

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,

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should be aware that unwanted materials can be recycled into a new item so it is advised that they learn how to reuse wastes. In conclusion,

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governments

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, companies and

individuals

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should work together in

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to achieve a great improvement in environmental

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adhere to the guidelines implemented,

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it can be maintained properly.