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Writing Samples
Band 6

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter explain what has happened describe the bag and its contents say what you would like them to do about this problem You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing
this
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 letter to inform
about
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you about
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 a lost
bag
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 on
the
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apply
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flight UL2120.
Last
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 week I
travel
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travelled
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 from India to London on flight no UL2120. But I was
on
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in
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 a hurry to go to my hotel and I left my
bag
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 on the flight. I realized about my
bag
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 after I reached to hotel. Because I was looking for some documents to show to
hotel
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 reception and those document was in the same
bag
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. It was a black colour back
weigh
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weighing
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 nearly 7kg and
size
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sized
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 around
750mm*600
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750 mm*600
mm. There were
few
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a few
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 clothes of mine in the
bag
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 and there were some documents related to my travelling.
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Also
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,Also
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 there was a pair of brown colour shoes inside the
bag
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. I have called you regarding
this
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 issue to your departments and I am sending
this
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 email as per your request. I can understand now it is too late to look for
this
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bag
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, but I am wondering if you could find
this
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bag
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 for me
please
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. Because the documents
was
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on
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in
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 the
bag
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is
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they were
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 really important to me. Please feel free to contact me if you need any additional information. Thank you. Yours faithfully, Jhon
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