the chart below shows the value of one country export in various categories during 2015 and 2016. the table shows the percentage change in value of export in 2016
The chart above illustrates the earning proportion of products being sent out of the country in five different areas from 2015 to 2016.
It's clear that textiles
,
earn the lowest income in 2015, whilst the highest is Remove the comma
apply
petroleum
products. In spite of the number, Agricultural items show insignificant development by only 0.81% rises in 2016.
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Overall
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Petroleum
items Use synonyms
achieve
the biggest amount of all in both 2015 and 2016 around $60 Wrong verb form
achieved
billions
each year. There Change to singular
billion
is
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are
also
engineered goods that get Linking Words
similar
amount of money to Add an article
a similar
Petroleum
which is Use synonyms
also
nearly 60%. Linking Words
Hence
, fabrics are the least product that Linking Words
being
exported approximately 25%. Add a missing verb
is being
Moreover
, Linking Words
the
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apply
agricultural
and Replace the word
agriculture
the
jewellery are in between Correct article usage
apply
amongst
all. Their Change preposition
apply
annually
purchasing income Change the word
annual
are
close to 40%, not the best yet can not be the lowest.
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is
In addition
to the data, textiles take a lead in value increases Linking Words
around
15% just by 12 months. Change preposition
by around
On the other hand
, Linking Words
eventhough
Correct your spelling
even though
petroleum
scores the highest number of Use synonyms
product
sold, the Fix the agreement mistake
products
increases
Fix the agreement mistake
increase
only
3% in a year.Add a missing verb
is only
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words petroleum with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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