The bar chart shows the percentages of the Canadian workforce in five major industries in 1850 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given scheme illustrates the
number
of employees in different fields of work, namely, manufacturing, services
, agriculture and fishing, construction and
energy and water in Canada between 1850 and 2020.
Correct word choice
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Overall
, it is noticeable that initially
production and services
were the most popular jobs for Canadians, however
, in 2020 an overwhelming percentage
of individuals worked in assistance.
In 1850, the percentage
of the manufacturing workforce accounted for 36%, which was almost 7 times as many as the number
of people who were involved in building businesses. Meanwhile, there were
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was
11
Correct article usage
an 11
percent
difference between the Change the spelling
per cent
number
of individuals who had a job connected to services
and those who were fishing or earned money by planting crops, which constituted 33% and 22%, respectively.
On the contrary
, there were similar patterns concerning the percentage
of employees who supplied others with energy and water, which made up an insignificant 3% in 1850. In 2020, the workforce in services
accounted for a vast 81%, which was 8 times as many as the number
of individuals who were involved in construction. There were identical diagrams regarding the percentage
of employed people in agriculture and fishing and energy and water, which constituted a tiny 1% each.Submitted by karolinavash2552 on
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