the line chart shows trend in terms of employment in the USA in millions

the line chart shows trend in terms of employment in the USA in millions
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The given line chart illustrates information about employment in Manufacturing, Services, and Agriculture in the USA between 1975 and 2025.
Overall
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, an upward trend was observed in the rate of employment in Services,
while
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the decline was experienced in Manufacturing and Agriculture. In 1975, 10
million
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people worked in Manufacturing and Services and the number of people working in these fields increased gradually and stayed at 40
million
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. Employees in Manufacturing went up 90
million
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,
however
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,
this
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figure declined to 10
million
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at the end
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of the period. The proportion of workers in the Agricultural industry was at its highest peak (80
million
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) at the beginning and
this
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tailed off to around 40
million
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in 1980,
this
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kept going down till 2025 and stayed at 10
million
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.
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