you have bought some clothing online and you are not satisfied with your purchase writ a letter to the company that you bought the clothing from , in your email give detail of the purchase describe the problem explain why you need a replacement urgently

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Dear Sir or Madam I am writing to ask you

replace

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to replace

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my purchase

wich

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which

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I bought yesterday. I got one T-shirt and 2

jeans

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pairs of jeans

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and 2

pants

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pairs of pants

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from your website ,

Unfortunatly

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Unfortunately

all of them have problems. I ordered

dark

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a dark

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blue T-shirt but you sent me

navy

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a navy

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blue one. I am not satisfied with the quality of

jeans

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the jeans

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and pants

the

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they

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look

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apply

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poor and

obviously

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they are so drab

besides

they are

compeletly diffrent

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completely different

from the picture that your staff uploaded

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the website , in your site was

writen

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written

all of the goods are imported from Germany but most of them has the label of china, Actually your company already broke the rules by

this

lie ,

on the other

hand

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I choose

large

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a large

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size for pants but I

recived

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received

medium size and I can wear them. As I said you have sent me

wrong

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the wrong

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clothes

thus

you have to change my purchase and bring

correct

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the correct

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clothes for me. thank you for your help and support in advance

your

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yours

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faithfully SAED

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Paragraph 1 - Introduction

Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Linking words
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0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
20
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: <4

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: <4

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

173 words

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you have bought some clothing online and you are not satisfied with your purchase writ a letter to the company that you bought the clothing from , in your email give detail of the purchase describe the problem explain why you need a replacement urgently

Fully explain your ideas

Today children are surrounded by electronic devices such as personal computers, tablet computers, and smart phones, and they learn to use them at a very early age. What are advantages and disadvantages of this situation?

In many countries, students leave high school without learning how to manage their money. Why is that the case? What could be done to tackle the issue? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You have recently ordered an item through the Internet, but are not happy with the purchase. Write to the company. In your letter: – Describe what you purchased, – explain why you are not happy with the purchase, – tell them what you would like them to do about the situation.

Some people believe that a person's intelligence is inherited from the parents, while others believe that their environment is the main factor. Discuss both views. Which factor do you think is mostly responsible for intelligence.