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you have bought some clothing online and you are not satisfied with your purchase writ a letter to the company that you bought the clothing from , in your email give detail of the purchase describe the problem explain why you need a replacement urgently

#purchase #writ #company #email #detail #replacement
Dear Sir or Madam I am writing to ask you
replace
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to replace
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 my purchase
wich
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which
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 I bought yesterday. I got one T-shirt and 2
jeans
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pairs of jeans
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 and 2
pants
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pairs of pants
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 from your website ,
Unfortunatly
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Unfortunately
 all of them have problems. I ordered
dark
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a dark
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 blue T-shirt but you sent me
navy
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a navy
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 blue one. I am not satisfied with the quality of
jeans
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the jeans
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 and pants
the
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they
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 look
like
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apply
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poor and
obviously
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,obviously
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 they are so drab
besides
 they are
compeletly diffrent
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completely different
 from the picture that your staff uploaded
in
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on
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 the website , in your site was
writen
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written
 all of the goods are imported from Germany but most of them has the label of china, Actually your company already broke the rules by
this
 lie ,
on the other
hand
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,hand
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 I choose
large
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a large
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 size for pants but I
recived
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received
 medium size and I can wear them. As I said you have sent me
wrong
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the wrong
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 clothes
thus
 you have to change my purchase and bring
correct
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the correct
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 clothes for me. thank you for your help and support in advance
your
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yours
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 faithfully SAED
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