Some employers believe that job applicants’ social skills are more important than their academic qualifications. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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In
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day and age, there are many factors that help
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more straightforward to find a profession.It is believed that education is more essential than social
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job.In my opinion, I strongly support that both social
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and qualifications are
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equally
necessary. The ideas to clarify these views will be illustrated in
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why qualification is necessary. Knowledge could be
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as the background and it is easier to train
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a person who already
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basic insight in certain field to match the job
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requirement
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.
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, the company can retain money and time on training .
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, after training
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, the company
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has more advanced employees.The
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reason
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qualification can
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that
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spent a long time in training. They have a lot of practice experience and have been trained to have a professional working attitude so it will be easier to work and interact with them.So that, when the boss has an important mission to entrust,they might be the person that
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trusts with tasks without worrying.
In addition
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, social
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are
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necessary when looking a employment . You can not develop completely your
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career
without social
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. If a person only learns
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professional
knowledge without interactions and communication. Good communication can create sympathy for your boss and colleagues.
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worker can create sympathy for customers thanks to skillful speaking. From that,
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will complete all the assigned orders and may be promoted to higher
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in the future. In conclusion, having considered both views. I think those two
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are both views that will make
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look the most outstanding when applying for a job.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Interpersonal dynamics
  • Adaptability
  • Teamwork
  • Networking
  • Emotional intelligence
  • Conflict resolution
  • Academic credentials
  • Technical expertise
  • Theoretical knowledge
  • Professional development
  • Career advancement
  • Specialization
  • Workplace harmony
  • Customer relations
  • Remote work
  • Digital communication
  • Job competency
  • Holistic assessment
  • Industry-specific skills
  • Work ethic
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