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#writing #task_2 Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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I am strongly showing my interest in the Master of
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 Administration MBA course at the University of Stirling because I think
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 course will not only boost my career but
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 increase my existing skills to reach a new level. The motivation of my learning abilities inspired me to study
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 program and it will enhance my knowledge.
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for choosing
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 course I think
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 Administration is the study of sales, marketing, operations and strategic management which is very useful for me.
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 events in my school competition.
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 Administration which will ensure that I actively participate in future activities
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 moving to the diploma in computer engineering had a twist and turn for me. During my professional journey, I have learned some new skills
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 as problem-solving, critical thinking, creativity, organization, management, leadership, teamwork and many more. As per my belief, with the help of
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 of skills, we can create something that can extra-ordinary improve the quality of life & and growth of our career. I personally enrolled with
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 university for better progress and to learn something unique.
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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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