Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter explain what has happened describe the bag and its contents say what you would like them to do about this problem

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

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letter to inform you about my left stuff.

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with,

last

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weed December 23 I took

flight

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a flight

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from Belgium to London the flight

number

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is AF566. Unfortunately, I

have forgot

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left

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one suitcase on your plane because I was in

quit

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quite

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hurry

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a hurry

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when I got

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to my

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hotel

only

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and only

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then

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after I realize I left

bag

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my bag

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. It was

red

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a red

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suitcase where I

have

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had

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put my important documents

as well as

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some of my used

cloths

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clothes

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, my humble request to you please if you

found

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find

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my bag you can cargo to my address which I will give

bellow

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below

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and please send your bank account

number

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so I can send you money for

cargo

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the cargo

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charge or delivery fees. My address details are

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as follow

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follows

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. Country United

kingdom

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Kingdom

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, city London, street 45A, building name

haward

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Haward

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johnson, flat 2nd, room

number

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23. My name is Nima

gelbu sherpa

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Gelbu Sherpa

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and my ticket

number

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is 6543 A. I hope you got my full details for cargo my bag if you need any more details please you can contact me my mobile

number

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is 8726338398.

your

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yours

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faithfully, Nima

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coherence cohesion

Clearly state the purpose of the letter in the opening paragraph.

coherence cohesion

Use paragraphs to organize your ideas and present one idea per paragraph.

task achievement

Provide more specific details about the bag and its contents.

task achievement

Use a more formal and professional tone throughout the letter.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
19
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: <4

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: <4

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

189 words

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Unfortunate incident
Flight details
Distraction
Valuable possessions
Sentimental value
Lost and found procedure
Safe return
Compensation
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Gratitude
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