IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 3.5

Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter explain what has happened describe the bag and its contents say what you would like them to do about this problem

#week #flight #london #plane #bag #hotel #airline #contents
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
 letter to inform you about my left stuff.
To begin
 with,
last
 weed December 23 I took
flight
Correct article usage
a flight
show examples
 from Belgium to London the flight
number
 is AF566. Unfortunately, I
have forgot
Wrong verb form
left
show examples
 one suitcase on your plane because I was in
quit
Correct your spelling
quite
show examples
hurry
Correct article usage
a hurry
show examples
 when I got
my
Change preposition
to my
show examples
 hotel
only
Correct word choice
and only
show examples
then
 after I realize I left
bag
Correct pronoun usage
my bag
show examples
. It was
red
Correct article usage
a red
show examples
 suitcase where I
have
Wrong verb form
had
show examples
 put my important documents
as well as
 some of my used
cloths
Correct your spelling
clothes
show examples
.
In addition
, my humble request to you please if you
found
Wrong verb form
find
show examples
 my bag you can cargo to my address which I will give
bellow
Correct your spelling
below
show examples
 and please send your bank account
number
 so I can send you money for
cargo
Correct article usage
the cargo
show examples
 charge or delivery fees. My address details are
Correct word choice
as follow
show examples
follow
Wrong verb form
follows
show examples
. Country United
kingdom
Capitalize word
Kingdom
show examples
, city London, street 45A, building name
haward
Change the capitalization
Haward
show examples
 johnson, flat 2nd, room
number
 23. My name is Nima
gelbu sherpa
Correct your spelling
Gelbu Sherpa
show examples
 and my ticket
number
 is 6543 A. I hope you got my full details for cargo my bag if you need any more details please you can contact me my mobile
number
 is 8726338398.
your
Correct the word
yours
show examples
 faithfully, Nima
Submitted by gelbu2021 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

coherence cohesion
Clearly state the purpose of the letter in the opening paragraph.
coherence cohesion
Use paragraphs to organize your ideas and present one idea per paragraph.
task achievement
Provide more specific details about the bag and its contents.
task achievement
Use a more formal and professional tone throughout the letter.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Unfortunate incident
  • Flight details
  • Distraction
  • Valuable possessions
  • Sentimental value
  • Lost and found procedure
  • Safe return
  • Compensation
  • Assistance
  • Gratitude
  • Follow-up
What to do next:
Look at other essays: