Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter explain what has happened describe the bag and its contents say what you would like them to do about this problem
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to inform you about my left stuff.
To begin
with, last
weed December 23 I took flight
from Belgium to London the flight Correct article usage
a flight
number
is AF566. Unfortunately, I have forgot
one suitcase on your plane because I was in Wrong verb form
left
quit
Correct your spelling
quite
hurry
when I got Correct article usage
a hurry
my
hotel Change preposition
to my
only
Correct word choice
and only
then
after I realize I left bag
. It was Correct pronoun usage
my bag
red
suitcase where I Correct article usage
a red
have
put my important documents Wrong verb form
had
as well as
some of my used cloths
.
Correct your spelling
clothes
In addition
, my humble request to you please if you found
my bag you can cargo to my address which I will give Wrong verb form
find
bellow
and please send your bank account Correct your spelling
below
number
so I can send you money for cargo
charge or delivery fees. My address details are Correct article usage
the cargo
Correct word choice
as follow
follow
. Country United Wrong verb form
follows
kingdom
, city London, street 45A, building name Capitalize word
Kingdom
haward
johnson, flat 2nd, room Change the capitalization
Haward
number
23. My name is Nima gelbu sherpa
and my ticket Correct your spelling
Gelbu Sherpa
number
is 6543 A. I hope you got my full details for cargo my bag if you need any more details please you can contact me my mobile number
is 8726338398.
your
faithfully,
NimaCorrect the word
yours
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coherence cohesion
Clearly state the purpose of the letter in the opening paragraph.
coherence cohesion
Use paragraphs to organize your ideas and present one idea per paragraph.
task achievement
Provide more specific details about the bag and its contents.
task achievement
Use a more formal and professional tone throughout the letter.