The charts below show the changes in the proportion of energy produced from different resources in a country in 1985 and 2003. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The charts below show the changes in the proportion of energy produced from different resources in a country in

1985 and 2003.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate the changes in the percentage of
energy
that was produced from different sources in a country in two different years ( 1985 and 2003).
Overall
, the production of
energy
from oil and nuclear decreased significantly over the period given,
while
coal and natural gas spread more widely. In 1985, more than half of the
energy
was produced from oil. Nuclear had only a tiny proportion,
whereas
hydro
energy
remained the same. The pie chart shows that 52% of
energy
was produced from oil in 1985. In comparison, in 2003
this
proportion declined to 39%.
Likewise
,
energy
from nuclear had the same trend and
this
amount dropped from 22% to 8%. In terms of natural gas, its production went up from 13% in 1985 to 23% in 2003.
Moreover
, the proportion of
energy
produced by coal doubled from 8% to 22%.
Furthermore
, the fraction of renewable
energy
quadrupled and increased from 1% to 4%
although
it was quite small.
Hydro
Correct your spelling
Hydroenergy
energy
did not show any changes.
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