Many university students want to learn about different subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others feel it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for their qualification. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

For a long time now people in government or university officials with the help of students

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trying to not only improve or change the

subjects

taught in universities

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but

also

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strive to make the studying experience more enjoyable and fulfilling. An example of

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would be allowing pupils to attend additional classes to their liking next to their main course. Some people praised

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change and others did not. In

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I will elaborate on both sides of the matter.

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, in my

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having more

subjects

than usual becomes beneficial in

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of

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a job. Many universities send out hundreds and thousands of pupils under the same qualification to apply their knowledge

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different companies.

Moreover

, since so many people have the same diploma it is hard to stand out before employers.

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, the additional courses could achieve

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understanding of a certain subject or even provide new knowledge,

for

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management when studying natural sciences, which can be implemented in individuals' work

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to be or encourage others to be more efficient.

Furthermore

, by having more

subjects

a person can really narrow a path of choice in

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degrees. I think

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it helps students, especially

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, to find

a topics

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they are most drawn to and most motivated to learn about

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more. In my experience, taking up nanotechnologies when I was studying biotechnology, opened my mind to

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topic, which had the right amount of physics and chemistry that I strived for.

On the other hand

,

subjects

that are already assigned have most likely a lot of homework and tests, which need to be passed, and picking up more work could be a tool

on

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a person’s health. As I mentioned before, I took up the subject of nanotechnology, but

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did not mention how the amount of work and studying doubled and it negatively affected my health. I had less time to relax and gave up exercising which led to anxiety, catching illnesses more easily and

overall

constant tiredness.

To sum up

, having more objects to

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into has its pluses, like a chance to stand out

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the others in the application process for a certain role.

Also

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it helps you to seek out areas

a persons

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would want to learn about after graduation.

However

, it has to be chosen by cation as workload could increase, which can lead to health problems,

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anxiety or illnesses.