The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
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The chart
display
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displays
comparison
of Add an article
a comparison
the comparison
men
and women
passing rate
of driving Correct article usage
the rate
test
in one Asian country from 1980 to 2010. Overall
, women
has
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have
higher
passing ratio of driving Add an article
a higher
test
than men
in each year of driving test
. Both women
and men
show an increase
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increased
trend
of
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in
percentage
of driving tests passed.
In 1980, nearly 50% of Correct article usage
the percentage
women
passed the driving test
while
only 28% men
did the same. Change preposition
of men
This
trend
increased in 1990 with just over 50% of women
pass
the Wrong verb form
passing
test
, while
almost 40% of men
passed. This
trend
continue
in 2000, with Wrong verb form
continued
men
and women
show
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showing
significant
increase nearly 70% and 50% respectively. Correct article usage
a significant
This
trend
changed in 2010 with men
passing
ratio Correct your spelling
men-passing
was
steady. Replace the word
being
In
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On
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the otyher
otyher
hand, Correct your spelling
other
women
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the women
passed
percentage declined to 65%.
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who passed
Overall
, the trend
showed an increase of
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in
percentage
passed ratio for both Correct article usage
the percentage
gender
. Change to a plural noun
genders
Furthermore
, women
was
more Change the verb form
were
succesfull
compared to Correct your spelling
successful
men
in terms of result
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the result
of
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on
driving
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the driving
test
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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