You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
People have different views on
wether
college students should learn other courses Correct your spelling
whether
expect
their own subjects, Correct your spelling
except
whlie
others reckon they ought to focus on a qualification. I do believe that it is more Correct your spelling
while
benefical
to study more Correct your spelling
beneficial
subject
.
On the one hand, there are many reasons why they want to choose one subject. Fix the agreement mistake
subjects
To begin
with, giving all time to studying for degree
is less Add an article
a degree
stress
Replace the word
stressful
from
the universityChange preposition
at
,
because the lesson is relatively less than others who choose other subjects. Remove the comma
apply
Furthermore
, working for an apprenticeship can improve many job
experience which is good for them to find a decent job
in the future. For example
, current job
positions are looking for an employee who has operation skills which can only be obtained through taking part in such
apprenticeship.
On the other hand
, learning other courses in addition
to their major is important for their width of employment. Because they can learn other knowledge which is useful to combine with their main subjects. For example
, some students who study in
finance choose Change preposition
apply
the
courses Correct article usage
apply
of
computer science, Change preposition
in
as
a Correct word choice
and as
result
that they can use the knowledge of coding to Add the comma(s)
,result
bulid
the process of Correct your spelling
build
auto
trading system. If they don't have Add an article
the auto
an auto
this abilities
, they Change the determiner
this ability
these abilities
would
not get Wrong verb form
will
a
ideal Change the article
an
job
in future.
In conclusion, I can understand the reasons why individuals tip the balance in favour of just focus
on one subject, Wrong verb form
focusing
although
it may less stress and have time to get a
apprenticeship ,Change the article
an
but
I would argue that they can benefit more from the diversity of knowledge.Remove the conjunction
apply
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