some people say that, to reduce traffic congestion in large city, governments should act to reduce the number of cars on the roads. others say that it is the responsibility of individuals to use cars less and public ptransport more. discuss both these views and give your opinion. give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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in big cities has been discussed currently. Some

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suppose that the authority is in charge of reducing private

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on the road in order to reduce

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congestion. Meanwhile,

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others believe that individual's awareness to lower the use of

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is needed and to utilize public

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of keep using

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. I personally believe that collective action is required to fight

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issues related to overloaded

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on the street. I personally believe that

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, wise government policy and individual awareness should work hand in hand for

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better

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management in the future. Nowadays, the number of private

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is overloaded

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several reasons. Compared to the previous decades, many

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now own

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because it is more affordable and has practical payment method

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as instalment. It is predicted that more

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will buy new private

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in the upcoming years

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advanced features and low taxes. In order to prevent

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from buying new

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, the government's role is required to establish an updated policy related to car tax. By increasing car tax

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would refuse to upgrade their

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by buying a new one. So that as the old

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will be broken the number of

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on the street will be reduced in the future.

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been tested and succeeded in many countries

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as Japan and Taiwan. As

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process will take a very long time to achieve its goal, another solution is required. In the past,

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refused to use public

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because of the lack of management and safety.

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, that kind of reason is no longer relevant as the authority has improved the quality of public transportation in big cities.

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, Jakarta as one of the cities with the worst

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began to provide more public

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options and routes to attract the citizens to switch from private

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.

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that, CCTV and security guard has been included in many public transportation to improve customer safety.

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, many of public

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are subsidized by the government so

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so much cheaper now. With all of these improvements and ease,

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who keep using personal

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when they can use public

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are considered selfish. Without personal awareness, it is almost impossible to achieve well-managed

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