With the increase in transport and accommodation problems in many cities, some governments are encouraging businesses to move to rural areas. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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had been motivating

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to move to underdeveloped

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. In the upcoming paragraphs, we are going to discuss the numerous advantages and disadvantages related to the solution

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came up with. Out of the countable disadvantages, one main drawback noted is that deforestation

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been taking place on a large scale basis. A large

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is required to

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the businesses by

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and to provide

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to the employees, who will be working there.

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will affect the ecological cycle and in

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increase global warming to an alarming stage. But there are many advantages that

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Firstly

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employment

in the rural

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for the residents of that region. With the shifting of

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to rural

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, there will be

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of

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around the businesses

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as

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of grocery shops, cloth

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various restaurants, etcetera.

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helps in the advancement of the villages and

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employment

opportunities for the rural people.

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diverting the crowd to

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to control the inflation rate in the metro cities.

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helps the employees to use their money to upgrade their living standards which

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earlier compromised

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costly living expenses.

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higher rents in the cities like

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make

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and stay in more

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congested

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like 3-4 people in 1 BHK

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encouraging the

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corporate

companies

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to

move

in

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rural

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have many drawbacks

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its benefits outweigh the disadvantages.

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in

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employment

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rural

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helps to control the inflation rates.