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The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004.

The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004.
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This
 diagram illustrates the percentage of expense in three domains among 5 age groups in the UK in 2004.
Overall
,
in contrast
, the food and drinks portion had a stable
difference
 between age groups, and the least
different
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difference
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 between each domain was in
31
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the 31
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-45
group
.
Averagely
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, there was a positive
difference
around
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of around
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 2 to 8
percent
 in the food and drink area between each
group
. Except for the eight
percent
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difference
 between
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the
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under 30 and 31-45
group
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groups
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, which were about six and fourteen
percent
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per cent
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 for each.
In addition
, the rest of the three groups which were 46-60, 61-75 and over 76+
group
, only had a gap
around
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of around
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 three
percent
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per cent
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 between them, which was seventeen, twenty,
twenty-three
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and twenty-three
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pencent
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per cent
 respectively. In
31
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the 31
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-45
group
, the range of
difference
 between each area was less than ten
percent
.
Firstly
, the least was the entertainment portion, which was eight
precent
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per cent
, after that was restaurant and hotel for twelve
percent
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per cent
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 and thirteen
percent
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per cent
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 in food and drinks
propotion
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proportion
promotions
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words difference, group, percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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