The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004.
This
diagram illustrates the percentage of expense in three domains among 5 age groups in the UK in 2004.
Overall
, in contrast
, the food and drinks portion had a stable difference
between age groups, and the least different
between each domain was in Replace the word
difference
31
-45 Correct article usage
the 31
group
.
Averagely
, there was a positive Replace the word
On average
difference
around
2 to 8 Change preposition
of around
percent
in the food and drink area between each group
. Except for the eight percent
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per cent
difference
betweenCorrect article usage
the
group
, which were about six and fourteen Change to a plural noun
groups
percent
for each. Change the spelling
per cent
In addition
, the rest of the three groups which were 46-60, 61-75 and over 76+ group
, only had a gap around
three Change preposition
of around
percent
between them, which was seventeen, twenty, Change the spelling
per cent
twenty-three
Correct word choice
and twenty-three
pencent
respectively.
In Correct your spelling
per cent
31
-45 Correct article usage
the 31
group
, the range of difference
between each area was less than ten percent
. Firstly
, the least was the entertainment portion, which was eight precent
, after that was restaurant and hotel for twelve Correct your spelling
per cent
percent
and thirteen Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in food and drinks Change the spelling
per cent
propotion
.Correct your spelling
proportion
promotions
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