The line graph below describes production of different fuels in the UK from 1981 to 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below describes production of different fuels in the UK from 1981 to 2001.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph provides information about the
production
of coal, gas, and petroleum in the UK from 1981 to 2001
Overall
, there was a decline in the
production
of all three types of fuel over the given time periods, with coal experiencing the most significant decrease.
To begin
, coal
production
started at 127
million
tonnes
in 1981, and dropped to 51
million
tonnes
in 1984,
then
recovered to 106
million
tonnes
in 1986 but steadily declined to a low of 35
million
tonnes
in 2001.
Furthermore
, Petroleum
production
showed a slight increase from 96 to 100
million
tonnes
at the beginning of the period. It
then
gradually decreased to a low of 79
million
tonnes
in 1989.
In addition
, From 1991 to 2001 petroleum
production
remained relatively stable, ranging from 80 to 87
million
tonnes
.
In contrast
, natural gas
production
started at 72 billion cubic meters (
bcm
) and increased for almost 10 years, reaching a peak of 113
bcm
in 1990.
Afterward
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, it gradually declined by approximately 5
bcm
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cm
per year, reaching a low of 67
bcm
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cm
in 1999. There was a slight recovery to 72
bcm
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cm
in 2001.
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