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The line graph below describes production of different fuels in the UK from 1981 to 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below describes production of different fuels in the UK from 1981 to 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph provides information about the
production
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 of coal, gas, and petroleum in the UK from 1981 to 2001
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, there was a decline in the
production
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 of all three types of fuel over the given time periods, with coal experiencing the most significant decrease.
To begin
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, coal
production
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 started at 127
million
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tonnes
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 in 1981, and dropped to 51
million
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tonnes
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 in 1984,
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 recovered to 106
million
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tonnes
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 in 1986 but steadily declined to a low of 35
million
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tonnes
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 in 2001.
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, Petroleum
production
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 showed a slight increase from 96 to 100
million
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tonnes
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 at the beginning of the period. It
then
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 gradually decreased to a low of 79
million
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tonnes
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 in 1989.
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, From 1991 to 2001 petroleum
production
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 remained relatively stable, ranging from 80 to 87
million
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tonnes
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.
In contrast
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, natural gas
production
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 started at 72 billion cubic meters (
bcm
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) and increased for almost 10 years, reaching a peak of 113
bcm
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 in 1990.
Afterward
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, it gradually declined by approximately 5
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bcm
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cm
 per year, reaching a low of 67
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bcm
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cm
 in 1999. There was a slight recovery to 72
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bcm
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cm
 in 2001.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, million, tonnes, bcm with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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