Some people believe that professional athletes serve as positive role models for young people, while others argue that their behaviour both on and off the field can have negative influences. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Professional
athletes
play an important role as an influencer in society. The majority of advocates strongly believe that they have a positive impact on youngsters, Use synonyms
while
some are of the opinion that their behaviour both on and off the field can have repercussions. I vehemently believe that they are good role models for the young Linking Words
generation
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due to
the discipline that they have and being an incentive.
A number of proponents firmly believe that professional Linking Words
athletes
increase young Use synonyms
people
's tendency to work hard in order to achieve their goals. Use synonyms
In other words
, when the young Linking Words
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athletes
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lives
by working hard, they will revise their attitude about their own Use synonyms
lives
to change it in good aspects. Use synonyms
For instance
, Mope who is one the greatest football players in the world is a role model for many young boys who try to be like him and have his discipline in their Linking Words
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. Use synonyms
Moreover
, famous sports players can be an incentive for the young Linking Words
generation
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therefore
they sometimes give a speech in public as an influencer in order to encourage Linking Words
people
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like Ronaldo who made a speech many years ago about his poor background and his successful life Use synonyms
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On the other hand
, some may claim that famous players can have negative aspects on and off the field because of their personality traits in society. to clarify, some professionals are like a double-edged sword they may have talent in their jobs but their personalities may have a bad effect on young Linking Words
people
and increase violence among them. Use synonyms
For example
, the behaviour of Zeydan in the middle of the match out of the blue attacked the referee because of his decision. Linking Words
As a result
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behaviour trend among youngsters. Linking Words
However
, they simply overlooked Linking Words
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notion and did not pay attention to the unparalleled positive impact that they have on the young Linking Words
generation
.
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To sum up
, A number of advocates strongly believe that professional Linking Words
athletes
have a positive effect on the young Use synonyms
generation
, Use synonyms
while
some others assume that both on and off the field they can have a negative impact. I firmly believe that they mitigate bad personality in young Linking Words
people
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due to
their discipline and being an incentive.Linking Words
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